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Smiles fade
As the darkness approaches
My world stops
The blades slide
And my cuts bleed
Any and everyone stares
I watch my flowing blood
Staining the skin on my wrists
Only my memories will remain
Don’t feel bad
Because my pain has gone
The deeper they get
The more I bleed
The more I begin to die
All feeling is gone
And my body grows cold
As I fall to the floor for the last time
Never to see the light of day
Trapped in the darkness
Forever
©2008-2009 ~thesistersofthemoon
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:iconthesistersofmoon:
i kno how it feels...lik falling into darkness....but at the same time it makes me feel alive and exhilirated. yet sad and unhappy....isn't it so queer?

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:blackrose: If life ain't just a game then why are we laughing!?
:iconthesistersofthemoon:
it is a extremely queer feeling of thrill and horror... because you never know which cut will be your last...

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HOLY HAWT SHI-AT!!!

"FUCK YOU"
"ok.." :)
"not that kind of fuck" -.-
"ohh" :(
"fine... take off your clothes!!!" :)
:iconthesistersofmoon:
exactly!

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:blackrose: If life ain't just a game then why are we laughing!?
:iconmasterofperfection:
:+fav: Wow thats awesome

May there be no pain in your future let there be life and love and even a little bit of luck
:iconthesistersofthemoon:
thank you very much!!!

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HOLY HAWT SHI-AT!!!

"FUCK YOU"
"ok.." :)
"not that kind of fuck" -.-
"ohh" :(
"fine... take off your clothes!!!" :)
:iconshadedrain:
I really like this line "As I fall to the floor for the last time" but most of this seems to be a little forced... like you had an idea, but couldn't quite get what you felt on paper.

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I've learned that when life hands you lemons, a bird will always shit in your lemonade.
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Into every life a little rain must fall. I must be living for several people.
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Appreciate sex, don't destroy it.
:iconthesistersofthemoon:
yeah i am an awful writer... i try... but i fail... thanks though... i'll see what i can change about it

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HOLY HAWT SHI-AT!!!

"FUCK YOU"
"ok.." :)
"not that kind of fuck" -.-
"ohh" :(
"fine... take off your clothes!!!" :)
:iconshadedrain:
That's the thing I've found though... if I try to write, it sucks so if something pops into my head, I write it down. If nothing flows out to follow it, it stays unfinished until something does. I have SOOO many unfinished pieces. I haven't written in so long, kind of sad, really....

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I've learned that when life hands you lemons, a bird will always shit in your lemonade.
-
Into every life a little rain must fall. I must be living for several people.
-
Appreciate sex, don't destroy it.
:iconthesistersofthemoon:
yeah i just post whatever i have and ask people ways to improve... my friend loves constructive critisism so talk to her :iconeager4damnation:

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HOLY HAWT SHI-AT!!!

"FUCK YOU"
"ok.." :)
"not that kind of fuck" -.-
"ohh" :(
"fine... take off your clothes!!!" :)

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